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darkcult
September 8th, 2003, 06:31 PM
..or Blood addiction-SaintVampire.
I’ve done this illustration/concept today, it is not overly exciting
but I like it.
Any constructive criticism or comment will be appreciated.
Tell me what you think…

http://sv1.3dbuzz.com/Upload/i56385addictiondarko.jpg

.................................................. ...........Darko/09sep03AD

(Turned the red down a bit……….thanks William b. Hand!)
William b. Hand
September 8th, 2003, 07:01 PM
Good one!

I think you should better define the left side jaw-line, either by line or by shading, so it pops forward some. Maybe a little tweaking of the left side of the face and making that side-of-head highlight describe the form a bit better. Just small changes, though.

Not sure about the hue shift in his chest... doesn't make sense to me. Although it does make me wonder what it would look like if you made his whole body slightly blue, lightest at his head and darkest at his navel. Maybe not. But that blue hue seems out of place.

And the red's a little bright for me. I think darkening it a bit might yeild good results.

Great hands and overall pose! Cool graphic. Love the wings and halo.
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DRESDEN
September 8th, 2003, 07:09 PM
hey darkcult, nice pic.
good job with the hands.
the pic is nice ,but the background should be darker. the pic is really realistic and the background is cartoony. good job on the pose.

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darkcult
September 8th, 2003, 07:15 PM
Yeah .. Thanks -William b. Hand and DRESDEN!

The background is supposed to be a Fresco on the wall... maybe needs more definition…

More thoughts?

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the good war
September 10th, 2003, 01:36 AM
hey man this is cool i love the bold background it makes your image striking i think his head may be overly asymmetrical .im wondering if colored (in ps) over a drawing shaded with a pencil
Blackarts
September 10th, 2003, 03:47 PM
How about making the fangs/teeth stand out a little more? Also, it looks to me like his left eye is popping out of his head a bit.
Marko Djurdjevic
September 10th, 2003, 03:50 PM
Dobro Brate!

Marko
Loga4
September 10th, 2003, 05:27 PM
Jeste dobro!
darkcult
September 10th, 2003, 08:40 PM
Thanks_the good war, Blackarts !!!

Thanks_Pozdrav iz Splita: Marko Djurdjevic, Loga4 !!!

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