Galius the Circus Gleeman

[dyoung]

http://www.dmfy.com/Galius-Page.html

this is something i did in about an hour or so just to have fun. I just looked at it and realize it's kinda blury... i'll fix it later I guess... anyways. let me know what you all think thought, crits always welcome of course...

-dyoung
www.dmfy.com

[zeroe]

good pencils and lineart!
but you should work on the coloring abit, try to shade more folds and creases into his robe to make it more appealing, and perhaps add more contrast to get a greater definition of form. Other than that no crits

[dyoung]

Thanks for the crit!
Yes, now looking at it after reading what you said I completely agree. I think lately I've been thinking too graphicly. something new to work on though. Thanks for your comments.
-dyoung