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Kirkkh
November 28th, 2007, 05:28 AM
There are some roughs for this in the sketches forum. No reference, all digital. Part of a 20 piece portfolio. I'll post my entire portfolio as it's completed for some feedback. Shooting for April 1st (little behind). Hope you like it. All Photoshop, MAC, CS3.

http://aycu18.webshots.com/image/33057/2005839566795105023_rs.jpg

XaNverse
November 28th, 2007, 06:22 AM
Overall the image is good. I like the see through body armor. Good job.

El Jeremie
November 28th, 2007, 06:24 AM
Nice, love the dynamic .
The only thing that bugs me is the fact she looks like a riot policeman but with a gun instead of a shield or no lethal weapon.

edalva006@yahoo.com
November 28th, 2007, 11:01 AM
it doesnt quite feel like she has a fore arm. maybe removingthe padding or add allitle more to it so it looks like its covering more, its to blotchy as well so try sharpening allot of those edges,i love the figure its got this in yo face attitude reminds me of robo cop :D

digital_zombie
November 28th, 2007, 11:08 AM
Very nicely done. Good sense of form.

I do agree with edalva006 about the forearm.

The other little thing is that she's floating, it makes her feet look odd when she's not grounded at all.

ArtistDaniel_Ross
November 28th, 2007, 11:12 AM
I would put some kind of shadow around her feet. It will make a huge difference to whatever high-paying potential employer will look at this. ;)

Kirkkh
November 28th, 2007, 08:35 PM
Thank you for all your responses. I appreciate any and all critiques.

walnut
November 29th, 2007, 01:37 AM
Her left foot seems out of perspective too, which adds to the floating effect. You did nail the badass pose however.