another good war nudge nudge

[the good war]

hey please give me crits or comments
by the way i would like to thank Johannes and toma for their advice
and i have progress pics if anyone is interested
http://www.angelfire.com/apes2/tgw/small_fin_drug_bot_no_text.jpg

[zeroe]

why hasnt anyone commented on this ?_?

anyways im liking this alot, quite an opinion of school id daresay :D.I think ur smoothish coloring workfs fairly well, but i think it would be more ffective it would go into either a more patchy style that defines features more, or an even smoother one. Cause like this some parts look a bit flat, eg: syringes. Adding a bit more contrast might also help.

But i wonder does this picture portray any personal experience of urs? cause i think its quite strong..

keep up the good work ;)

[the good war]

good point, ive been looking at fosters work and i love how the form just looks like it's sculpted. thanks i am going to try to take my paintings in that direction now :more contrast chopperer style, excellent. it was created with an economics teacher in mind

[the good war]

heyo i've made the alterations you suggested( smoothed the legs added contrast ect... the version you download now is the new version

[Atmospheria]

image is nice but typography is not good...it ruins the pic...
clear the text maybe...we can understand that way too...

[the good war]

so what do you think now?
without the text it feels empty on the upper left hand side i was going to add a flag i thought the muted red would balance screw driver but text was the easy fast and crappy way i suppose:(

[zeroe]

i like ur improvements, makes the pic a bit stronger. hmm i did like the writing tho.. ah well :P

[the good war]

thanks :D i have a pic on my computer with the letters still on i just changed this one for Atmospheria