Samurai Kills ninja

[alex_86]

Hi there guys,

Just gimme some comments on this. Anything you wanna say that will help me. I want to know how to color better and stuff so keep that in mind. Thanx

Sry about link guys

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[feels]

Can't see. Just post the link.

[Simplistics]

It's cool, but you can't tell what the Samurai killed the ninja with. All you see is this dark thing. What you should do (and not too graphic) is draw a bigger line of blood, somewhat like a swish-line in comics, and have it follow towards the blade.

[Szyslack]

i can't see it.

[Simplistics]

Originally posted by Szyslack
i can't see it.

Drag the link into your address bar :)

[Unknown Target]

I think that's complete. What's not finished about it? Anyways, it looks good, although the ninja's a teensy bit stiff, but not that bad. Also, the Samurai's sword should be a bit longer, no?


Anyways, great piece, I like the lighting ;)

[alex_86]

Well the lighting is a bit rough right now, and i dunno if you noticed but the shadow that goes across the left side of the ninja's body is not on his leg.

Also ya the ninja is supposed to be stiffer than usual cause he just had his back cut open hes doin that squeezing in the muscles thing. Thats also why his head is a bit tilted and elbows reaching back.

But still thx for comments, keep em comin.

I dont like how cartoony this looks, can anyone give some advice on how to improve on that. other than getting rid of the outlines.
:p

[rimwalker]

Pretty good. The pose on the ninja is good. He looks in pain.

The figure in the back, the samurai, seems posed odd though. His head doesn't seem to align properly with his body. It took me a minute to figure out he was facing backwards.

[alex_86]

Heh, I know man (about the samurai's pose), I kinda knew that would me a problem. However that is the "form" so I had to draw him that way. By "form" I mean its kinda traditional to make that stance when you make such a large cut, its very popular. But ya I do see that if you look at it the wrong way it looks like hes got a head on backwards. :D Thanx