DUMP yeah

[Crash]

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/0.jpg

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/1.jpg

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/2.jpg

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/3.jpg

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/4.jpg


http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/5.jpg

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/77278/6.jpg

i need crits :chug:

my scanner is still fcked so the pics arent as good as they can be.

[thomasaurus]

good work and ideas....watch proportion a bit on some. I really like your thumbnails page!

[LiL QoH]

Your drawings are a little too tight, they don't flow like a life drawing would. You should do a gesture(thumbnail or something) and work from there, if you just jump into it, the persons going to look really tight. Don't just draw with your hand draw with your whole arm/shoulder that should help you loosen up a little. And practice drawing circles! It'll train your arm to draw like that. I hope I made sense :P And I love the thumbnails btw

[EmilyROAR]

Okay, im not a great person to ask crits from but, the 4th drawing, the one of the girl, you either need to make her lower half bigger, or her upper half smaller or make her hips and thighs larger, because she looks way too...top-heavy. And the last drawing of the creature-thing looks to me like its about to fall over forwards, maybe shorten its back legs, or make its front legs longer to make him more even? Sorry if my crits arent that good of help cause I suck, but I tried my best :p

[dooom]

you lines make me think you were tense and apprehensive. on top of the advise i have allready given in #art i would say loosen up and dedicate maybe 10 pages to just scribbling around warming up. maybe start really small with you design like thumbnails and refine a little more as you get bigger drawings. the thumbnails will help you get the decisions made faster so your not thinking of where to put the line just how and what emotion you want that line to have. hope this help, its just my take on practice not really the work you have up here.

[Crash]

thank you all a bunch, about the warming up thing is something ive never done.


i will take you advice and write them down, thank you thank you thank you

[Grooveholmes]

I like the last one, its starting to show a bit of understanding of the muscles and stuff going on beneath the skin.

[WildSpruceMoose]

They are all looking good, but the 2nd, 3rd and last one really do a great job of showing me the creature. Warming up is always good ;)