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maytapon
November 20th, 2007, 10:33 AM
This is my knight
all of this picture draw with Bamboo fun(wacom).
software: Photoshop 7
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb246/mataphont/SWD-5-web.jpg
mariusz
November 20th, 2007, 01:16 PM
nice image. I like what happening above the warrior - those glass elements add nice dynamic to the image
peace!
digital_zombie
November 20th, 2007, 02:45 PM
I like the metallic rendering that you have, however what's going on?
I just see lots of stuff coming from no where and is the pointy thing at the end of the sword his foot? or part of the sword? His last two fingers that I assume are bent under look like they are just missing b/c there is no volume at the bend/underneath to show where they went.
Gatts
November 20th, 2007, 03:59 PM
Looking pretty good man. A bit shiny for my likes but that's just taste.
I can tell it's his foot at the end of his sword but I agree with PiercedLogic that it's a bit confusing. First of all it looks like he has no upper left leg, just a shin. His left leg (the one in the front of the image) is really short. Because of this it doesn't get the best out of the direction you put in the composition which is a straight arrow to the direction the sword is pointing at. The twirling shape around him emphasizes this but you could exaggerate it with the perspective and length of the leg. I also suggest to give his ankle a little angle to give his pose more balance / stability. I did a little paint over to show you what I mean:
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1186/paintoverrg6.jpg
I'm still learning all of this myself so you might want to get a second opinion on what I said.
Your definition of material and design really good though, so keep 'm coming.
MurdokX
November 20th, 2007, 04:09 PM
I think you should push back some left of those spiral elements to add more depth and dynamic-sm (??)
FlameDragon
November 21st, 2007, 09:48 PM
Looks really awesome!! But yeah, it doesn't jump out at me as much as it could ;)
dwan
November 22nd, 2007, 01:04 AM
great lighting and form (the metalic surface looks heavy and realistic) the overall image could use some more depth with the flying holographic/ spiraly "essence" being pushed back,,less saturation or less contrast..then the most forward elements (the bottem left) would be emphasized...the eye would then get to dance around the image..
gobbledygookie
November 24th, 2007, 03:28 AM
Very very good.
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