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Simplistics
September 4th, 2003, 11:03 PM
So I started to doodle today because I've been sick, and this is what has come out of it! I should doodle more often!

This is only the face, there is a body, but I'll post that later, just to keep you guys in suspence :lol

PS7, and a reference for the face... which is totally different now :)

http://home.comcast.net/~sinemesis/artwork/bonded.jpg

BlackRose
September 5th, 2003, 01:08 AM
my crits are the nose and the hair. the nose looks to muck like a pigs (not in a bad way) and the hair doesn't seem to fit in with the face.

Simplistics
September 5th, 2003, 04:23 PM
okay, I've got rid of the hangliders. Tell me what you think of this one!

http://home.comcast.net/~sinemesis/artwork/bonded1.jpg

enigma
September 5th, 2003, 04:59 PM
thats a damn good improvement on the hair

Simplistics
September 6th, 2003, 01:40 PM
I've had some complaints on my picture. Mainly the eyes and the composition. So before anyone starts that up again. #1 I've fixed the eyes, so they don't look "skeewompus" (or however you spell it). #2 I've fixed the nose, and the perspective issue on it. #3 The mouth has been fixed, it was a lower lip issue.


And #4, here is the reference.

http://home.comcast.net/~sinemesis/reference.jpg

I'll post an update when I do more stuff later on today. :)

Simplistics
September 7th, 2003, 06:36 PM
Another update since no one bothers replying :/

http://home.comcast.net/~sinemesis/artwork/bonded4.jpg