Warhammer Job

[brain plug]

This is for another Warhammer card, I pretty much hate it. But I've spent too long on it already. Any quick fix ideas?

http://home.earthlink.net/~monsterbox/previews/ELFWIZ9backup.jpg

[bwkeough]

I dunno if you would call it 'quick' but i think it would look better if the magic hand were stretched out over the corpses...unless this isn't supposed to be a necromancer reanimating the dead. If the elf just killed them, the bodies should be smoking or something. I think having the magic arm pointed at the viewer is flattening the image. but that's just my opinion.

In general I like it, not as much as some of your others tho. Sharpen some of the shapes and push a few of the values darker, its a little too even-toned.