gravity (and it works this time!)

[Szyslack]

i found a new host. so i can post again!!!

anyway, this is a color of the post that started all my troubles. i think it is a descent job, but i know it still needs some work, and there are some lighting issues. (keep in mind that i color using a mouse.)
http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/27277/p/462936_1330497362310237573_vl.jpg

[Ian Mack]

I am by no means a painter but I think you should play with the values of your colours more.

[Nucleardan]

some of the values are a little too close and it makes this peice frustrating to look at. Like the previous post says, you should play with values. Also, the peice is a little boring. When i think of one person falling off a roof and the other is bold/crazy enough to go after them, i would think that the technique would imply a little more excitement. Then again, that excitment could come to light when the tones and values are played with. Well, good luck.

Dan

[Triton]

The characters are hard to make out, otherwise ...cool!

[Szyslack]

http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/1/27277/p/464655_6463531531585527137_vl.jpg