Cruser - WIP

[Sequential75]

I been looking at Prometheus, spinefinger and others lately. So I decided to try at a space ship. Here's what I came up with. Now on to coloring....


http://www.brettwiseman.com/David/Forums/Ship%20I.jpg

[Nucleardan]

the perspective on the top edge of the cockpit is off as well as the front knotches in the two front spoilers. The farthest main wing looks awkward. I think there is a lack of continuity in terms of detail in it. Repeat the gizmos on the other side of the cruiser. The unbalance is very odd. Hash out your continuity and perspective problems and i think you'll come to find you've made a good space-craft.

[Sequential75]

Thanks, I 'll see how well I can fix those while I'm in photoshop.