Hunter red suit

[digitalinkrod]

Hello there everybody.
Another character with the same sci fi vibe.
I wanted to make a kind of cybernetic cold hunter...The suit protect the body from the dangerous chemical's substances& radiation on the lower level sectors. Generally the corporations used to hire these cyber mercs to hunt people who knows some dark secret about them , or find something valuable to the company's in the darkest places.
Hope you like it....All comments and critics are always welcome.:)

[Xract]

The detail and high contrasting colours make it seem just that bit more life like. I really like this, great job.

[JailHouseRock]

Love the colors dude!
nice work

[PirkkaH]

Yeh, good and clear concept, expect that right arm positioning looks quite unthoughtful. I try to mean, that is not quite well presented. Maybe that arm would do something else than just holding it on air.

[digitalinkrod]

Hey guys:confident
Thank you all for sharing your comments and critics as well...i really appreciate that.
I guess that hand don´t pleased everyone...i got the same tips about that in cgs...i was thinking about to change the arm for another cannon hand gun. the explanation for the posing is because he´s a cyborg...half man, half machine...he´s scanning the environment for targets...and when in this stage he stays standstill, frozen on that position...like a stone for avoid been detected.
That´s the first concept for this character, so you can expect more stuff with this guy.
Thanks again,
Peace:lens:

[Jakers]

I like the design and rendering of the character with the sharp texture...but I have a few suggestions if thats ok for the future??

That high contrasting midground debris is just so eye grabbing and flat...it needs to have less texture, more huge changes and maybe some shadows to help describe whats in there etc. The background buildings have the odd contrast problem that maybe doesnt make them feel where you want in 3D space (dark rebar like material sticking out for example) and their forms feel very non fleshed out. Even making the foreground stuff a bit darker may add depth. Also watch the highlight control - you can make certain shapes or features stand out more by softening some of them, they dont all need to be bright white and probably wouldnt be just because of how the environment would affect it :)

I like how you've used red and green and I dont think christmas! The armor and sky is really cool...see you around

[digitalinkrod]

Hey Jake:)
Thanks for watching and for the great tips....on the next concept for this hunter i´ll work more on the issues brought on first priority.
It first begin with a sketch for his bust and i like the design so much that i wanted to create a full body scene.I´m glad you like the suit design and for the green and red tones don´t make you think about Christmas...hehehe.
Cheers:wink:

[FIG]

I'd stay away from using so much white for the highlights. Pick other colors you see in the sky for lighting, paint out the white in the sky and also bring in the green lighting from the toxic waste on the armor. ALso, make the green a little destaturated. A complete redesign of the characters body suit would also benefit as I am seeing "generic armor dude" at the moment. The helmet works but everything else needs to go.

[Johndowson]

It is a great pic. I love it.
I'm no one to give critiques, but maybe a little more light and shadow on the body will make the scene more realistic.
It is great anyway. :)