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liangwei
October 31st, 2007, 11:53 PM
Hi,
This is my first post.
This drawing i am try to express the girl waiting for someone from midnight until early morning...
Any comments are welcome.

stalsby
November 1st, 2007, 12:10 AM
nice camera angle on that!

Doomgriever
November 1st, 2007, 05:46 AM
difficult to see her expression when u cover her mouth like that, the back of the car makes me dizzy. maybe the perspective is a bit off? dunno, else it's pretty neat

Paul "Otaking"
November 9th, 2007, 09:25 PM
I like it! I like it a lot, in fact.
It's well painted, and I like the concept behind it.

Robert.B
November 9th, 2007, 10:30 PM
wow such atmosphere and mood great job!

lumar
November 10th, 2007, 01:37 AM
she seems to have a lot of energy in her considering the situation

Wooly ESS
November 13th, 2007, 12:03 AM
Beautiful!

It tells a story.

Extollere
November 13th, 2007, 01:16 PM
This is nice, there are some really great elements here, especially the sky which is gorgeous. I don't agree with a couple of your composition choices though, mainly the arbitrary choice to cover the girl's mouth with the railing. It jumps right out at me. I understand this is deliberately done and a personal choice, but for me it creates too much claustrophobia and obstruction in that area. I would also really like to see some kind of texture on the wall below her (such as brick, cement, stone?) and on the street as well. Nice piece though, would love to see more.

liangwei
November 13th, 2007, 11:39 PM
Thanks for sharing your thought with me.