Recent life drawings (500kb total)

[hito]

These are from 8/21 and 8/28. Most recent ones I have. These are the best ones I think, from about 7 hours worth of drawings of mostly 1; 5; 10; and 20 min poses.

I know I need to keep proportions in mind more as I often loose track of it and the extremeties get a little big or small than they're supposed to be.

Please comment on anything that I can improve on.

Thanks in advance.

15min 8/21
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82103-15.jpg

30min 8/21
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82103-30.jpg

1min 8/28; I went back and darkened the ones I liked during break time. we usually do about 20 of these to start warm up.
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82803-1.jpg

5min 8/28
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82803-5.jpg

10min 8/28
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82803-10.jpg
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82803-102.jpg

20min 8/28
http://stu.aii.edu/~nll181/82803-20.jpg

[Jeff Gran]

lookin good man. Maybe varying the line weight of your outlines would help them seem more 3d... the think outlines flatten them a bit. the 1 min studies look great, better than my 2 min ones.

[feels]

Your quick gestures are quite impressive, so naturally, I was expecting more on your longer poses. But personally, I, myself, have difficulty putting in interior detail with the vine/compressed charcoal combo no matter how much time I'm given.

[Groover McNab]

I agree with feels on this one. These are good, but the one minute gesture stuff has a lot of energy that is missing in the longer ones IMHO. I like the 1-5 minute stuff a lot. Good work!