Raven

[Ian Mack]

Hey hey! So I was reading a book and decided to draw this character. Which I did, with no references to speak of. So, before I go to the next stage, I'd like to have some ppl crit the pose, anatomy, set-up etc.

Here's Raven. She's a big download.

http://art.basementlife.net/temp/Raven.jpg

[maxetormer]

The hand on the foreground looks a bit funny the precetive must be wrong and the face has some isuees as well, dunno what.
all the other seccions of the body seem ok; paint it :D looks like a great idea =)

(i was gonna do a paint over but i tought of asking if that it is ok first)

[Ian Mack]

Please do a paintover.

Another friend of mine gave me some advice which was to change the position of the forearm to holding her other arm. He said it would look more natural too if I brought the supporting shoulder up.

Anything in particular strike you as odd in the face ?

[Pillick]

needs more forehead - generally eyes are almost half way down a persons face? ish? also nose is pretty big, and hair looks very 2d and kinda sits infront of the face at a jaunty angle =P Think the head is a bit big overall too.

[maxetormer]

oh guess you will never see this.
well i played with your angel idea, and had lots of fun with it, so thanks for that =) i tryed to do an exact paintover but the proportions of the diferent limbs on your caracter were not very compatible so.. i did this
i hope it might help you

bw ill remove it from here if you want me to do that =)

sorry for takeing so long to do this, but i had to much work lately =)

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/maxetormer/Raven2.jpg