Corrupted Angel - First Post

[Myrkull]

This is my first post here, but I don't expect any mercy- I am trying to learn. I've been drawing several hours a day lately trying to improve on anatomy and figured what the hey, I would post one of my better ideas. This seems like a place where people are willing to help :) Without further adieu :

http://www.kevinhower.com/Gallery/ForumPics/corruptedangelsketch.jpg

I do want to turn this into a finished piece so the more feedback I can get in refining it the better

I edited this and relocated the image to my own site so that should hopefully take care of viewing issues.

[PencilPunx]

I'm having a hard time telling if he has long hair or if his head is on fire. That, plus if his halo is glowing like you seem to imply, I think his face/head would have some more high lights. You're off to a good start though.

[Myrkull]

both actually.. he has long hair and his halo is going to be wreathed in fire .. i see what you mean about the hilights though

[daniela]

I am not too crazy about the way you drew his left foot. The shape looks funny and I do not like the position you put it in. Other than that, I think you have the makings of a good piece. Nice job:thumbsup:!

[Myrkull]

if you can't see my image it is due to some kind of issue with deviant art because it was showing up fine earlier. apologies for wasting peoples time :(