cave monster

[leo_cesar]

http://members.fortunecity.com/leocesar/paint-08.jpg

[daniela]

I like the colors, but there is way too much empty space. Maybe you could have more of a closeup on the monster while still showing the person in the distance. The mood of the piece is pretty good though.

[leo_cesar]

I totally agree with you Daniela! Everything is out of focus, but the monster shouldn’t be. It would increase the dramatic felling, and of course add some other details in the scene to guide better the eyes on the subject.
Thanks.

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[metalwinds]

aside from what daniela said, the pic is way too fuzzy, and there isnt any depth too. it. sharpen and add more contrast to the foreground

peace