bloodbath1-3

[Grendel]

THese pages arent done - scanner still hasnt come yet
but here is the simeon stuff so far. Bloom will be paiting over these.
Page 1


http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/1.jpg


page2
http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/2.jpg

page 3

http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/3.jpg

[tegehel]

grendel, anybody told you you have issues?

LOL

That teddy bear eye zoom's great...

C.

[PencilPunx]

I know these aren't finished, but I got a little confused between the end of page two and the beginning of page 3. Did the kid throw the bear? Did the parents get killed? That issue aside, this is very grim, frightening stuff. In other words, it kicks ass.

[Myrkull]

I love it .. though I do have one question.. in the middle panel of the first page with the family behind the couch.. the father appears relatively unconcerned that his family is about to be slaughtered whereas everyone else looks a bit afraid.. it could be part of the story in which case i don't know what i am talking about.. keep up the good work though :)

[Grendel]

The kid drops the bear, the parents do die, the father has a look of fright which is hard to see cause the pict is small. I dont know im not greatly pleased with this ..thanks guys.