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Yeliseyev
October 19th, 2007, 02:45 PM
Hi everyone! ^_______^
For a long time was not here,
This my some new works, basically it is my personal concept sketches which I have made lately and I glad show it to you.
Thanks for critics and comments, are welcome)
Serpian
October 19th, 2007, 03:00 PM
Nice work! I really like the ships. Some of the characters are a little hard to read with the values not that unified. Also some areas look very sloppy. But the red ship I really like!
nickmarshallvfx
October 19th, 2007, 05:08 PM
Well I was constructing my post whilst i was scrolling through your work, and then i saw Serpians post, and he had basically stolen my speech word for word! ;)
Anyway, yea the painting styl looks great. The red ship is really nicely done. Some of them are quite hard to read though. Try working with values to really make sure you can read everything. You may want to reduce how busy the paintings are too, and not go into quite so much detail (although detail is relative so if you fix the other things i think that will be fine) :)
Lovely stuff. Im gonna give it 4 stars because there is much potential in it and it deserves more responses.
Yeliseyev
October 20th, 2007, 10:35 AM
Thanks you Serpian , and thanks space-sprayer for full)) comment, I agree with you that is necessary to work more above values. Anyway I am glad that you like small part of my stuff.
Thanks.))
chobomaster
October 21st, 2007, 03:48 AM
I like these. To crit, though, the figures look kind of cut and paste. I think for one, the feet are not always in perspective with the environment (notably the redhead). and in terms of detail, it looks like the main subject as a body are very highly detailed, and the rest of the image doesn't have that kind of treatment. These are really good on the whole.
Yeliseyev
October 21st, 2007, 12:27 PM
Thanks very much, Chobomaster, i agree with you, some works not absolutely good in details,
i shall work on it. )
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