my first post

[luiv]

hello, CA :)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/8296/futursx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Dahami]

Great environment!

You could add more detail to the planet or moon in the background. I also am confused by what some of these structures are, but I guess that comes from living on 20th century Earth, and not whenever/wherever this scene represents.

[theabones]

i like the planet as it is actually. i think your composition is a bit too balanced though. as cool as that big pointy building is, it kind of levels off the skyline. maybe if it were over on the right?

i think you need to chose one area of focus and really draw our eye there, then let us explore the rest. right now there are too many areas that could be focuses. maybe choose one and refine and sharpen a bit.

cool piece though, i hope you post more soon!

[kazart]

Welcome aboard, im new here myself. Like the environment, really nice composition and you have a vision but it does'nt look finished yet. All it needs is a little more attention to detail like the sky, its too bland needs more realism and volume. The structures in the forground dont look solid atall, use references to real buildings and scyscrapers and repaint them. I feel I want to see more of the group around what looks like a camp fire.

Keep up the good work and dont be afraid of criticism, I get it alot around here.

[skallagrim]

nice panorama I like the expansiveness. However I agree with theabones an area of focus would help immensely. You could probably squeeze 2 or 3 paintings out of this one image.
I like the contrast between the cityscape and the more rural side of the planet maybe you could play off of this theme in other images