New char lookn for advice

[undergroundkg]

i started this pic after seeing all over hawk preys amazing pics. the style i used was exactly as he had said he was doing so i am new to this but i like it. i use ps and wacom tablet.

but im always lacking somethin in my paintings and i am stryving to become a better artist so ALL c&C is welcome, appreciated, and greatly desired. so post any help ya can plz.

here is pic. took bout an hour to sketch this out
http://www.purgatory.net/acturus/pipes1.jpg

[undergroundkg]

and here is a quick 5 min clean up of it
http://www.purgatory.net/acturus/pipes2.jpg

[undergroundkg]

im messin around with coloring it even tho it dont go with the technique. im going to redo it as black and white again but for now here is some color

c&c desired !
http://www.purgatory.net/acturus/pipesC.jpg

[WildSpruceMoose]

Good work. Some anatomy issues, I see something wrong in the shoulders. It has a nice raw feel to it like hawkprey's concepts he did. Torso is shorter I believe than regular torsos, but my anatomy needs some practise, so I can't quite put my finger on it.

[undergroundkg]

hmm. you're right the anatomy is off...thanks. i have been workin on anatomy and will continue to do so.

here is a color update. duno if i like it better with just black and white or with the color but ill finish it either way just to get more digitalpainting experience
http://www.purgatory.net/acturus/pipesC3 .jpg