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AttackCat
August 26th, 2003, 06:40 PM
did this the other day, now that i'm looking at it, the anatomy seems off, but i must learn to draw women.
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-8/331012/demongoddess.jpg

Well... maybe i'll finish.. must find the motivation
gasmask
August 26th, 2003, 09:02 PM
Cool sketch, the anatomy is pretty good cept the torso is having issues..... the torso is too long and the hips are off and her stomach area has these weird bulges, there should only be the 2 for ribs. but ur line work is nicely done.
Beatnik
August 27th, 2003, 12:32 AM
I think the sketch looks great. The anatomy could be improved a bit if you were going for perfection but the theme lends itself to stylization. If you are going to have a fantasy creature like a dragon headed snake, why focus on the exact anatomy of the female form? Hell have fun with it.
RAMÓN
August 27th, 2003, 06:00 AM
It's fantasy like, so i won't crit about proportions or anything, but i do think the body could use some dynamics, it's a bit puppet like, to me. What also catches my attention is the face. It seems a bit off balance here and there, the chin maybe a bit too forwarded (just bit). And the nose seems a bit awkward too.

I like the sketch though, it's not bad at all. You should definately keep going. Not that i'm a superhero artist or anything, I just wanna help out. Hope this helps.
djfournr
August 27th, 2003, 08:57 AM
I think your character is leaning. Do you draw with your page at an angle? I do and I have found many of my characters leaning across the page. I have to force myself to work straight. Just a tip.. nice character! :chug:
AttackCat
August 27th, 2003, 10:08 AM
hey thanks for some good advice all.

Gasmask- yes, there are some clear anatomy issues with the torso, i wasn't totally going for exact human body structure, but i need to practice that as well.

Beatnik- yes, i was actually looking at the spectrum 9 fantasy art book before i drew this. As far as anatomy, always striving to get it right, not too worried about this girl though.

Ramon- thanks a bunch, yes it does appear to be somewhat stale, i need to rework the face, loosen it up a bit. As far as body dynamics, it was a bad crop right from the beginning, i just thought i could pull off something. I'll work on that.

Djfournr- i was drawing on a light table at school, i was turning it a lot while drawing it, but i somewhat put her at an angle just for the diagnal across the page, thanks for the tip.