stuffage (nudity)

[metalwinds]

garbage
http://images.deviantart.com/i/7/0/4/stupidsh.jpg

ice elemental
http://images.deviantart.com/i/b/f/4/iceelemental.jpg

http://images.deviantart.com/i/8/e/6/randcrap.jpg

think im gonna charcoal this one
http://images.deviantart.com/i/a/5/8/demonsg.jpg

peace

[subexisdance]

1) I think there should be more of an arch in her back, her rib cage should kind of "funnel" down into her lower back, where her butt should kinda "funnel" back out, giving that "hourglass" type shape, also it looks like the ribcage is only implied by the shadows, because the front shape looks a bit off too. Her hands are a bit big, but the rest of the anatomy seems right. I like the hair, and facial expression.

2) I really like this one, would love to see this finished or something...THe hand postures, and the hunchback is something that I've been working with for a while, you pulled it off perfectly.

3) Everything looks great, except that girls nose in the bottom left, I know that not everyone has a perfect nose, but like, thats a extremely bulbus nose....xD The guy sitting is great.

4) I kinda get it so far, not positively sure on how this is going to turn out, more line art or somethign would be helpful, but from what I can see, the mouth and jawline concept are great.

Keep up the good work man!

[leviathan]

Metalwinds,

Nice garbage. I know you're probably not desperate for crits on these pieces, but I think you should spend a little more time on the pose of your soon-to-be-charcoaled concept. The lower half and forearms don't seem to mirror the open-maw espression that the face and shoulder have. It looks damn cool, but you might consider a more dynamic lower body pose and hands/claws/forearms that continue the theme of the rest of the monster.

And just a side note: I love the faces on your human figures -- particularly the girls. There's something really unique and alive about them. I like the noses and lips.

[Halis_Aetrous]

The ice elemental and dragon-looking thing are both very cool. I'd like to see them both colored.

[metalwinds]

sub - thanks for the great crit. everything you said is correct and thanks for pointing out those problem areas.

leviathan - thanks. i need all the crits i can get. youre exactly right about that pose too, so i ll work on it before i charcoal it.

aetrous - thanks man.

peace