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Syklonis
August 24th, 2003, 06:19 PM
Here's some designs and ideas for a comic idea I have been concepting for the last couple years. Just wanted to get C&C on the work. Thanks,
-Syklonis

http://www.syklonis.com/my_art/bot.jpg
http://www.syklonis.com/my_art/alien.jpg
http://www.syklonis.com/my_art/soldier.jpg
http://www.syklonis.com/my_art/skin.jpg
http://www.syklonis.com/my_art/skin2.jpg

Lung_bug
August 24th, 2003, 06:29 PM
[speedmode]
1- good start but unfinished
2- feet?
3- off balance, fat legs
4- well done, especially the flapping clothes
5- awesome! great dynamic and everything, but where are the feet?

Dragox
August 25th, 2003, 12:25 AM
i agree in all points with Lung_bug.

The only thing i realy don't like is this "old German Symbol". It is your choice...whatever

incognito
August 25th, 2003, 12:39 AM
i'm not really offended by this, unless you're actually an anti-semite...? Either way, the drawings sure are nice.

ClocktowerArtworks
August 25th, 2003, 12:40 AM
nazi mechs and aliens?! interesting. nice designs and interesting concepts. i'd be interested to see this all fit in to a story. have you done much sequential art? i like your style. clean. though i am a little tired of seeing half-naked women charging in to battle. just doesn't make sense for a woman to be scantily clad when fighting armored soldiers with high-powered weaponry, but hey, sex sells right. let's see some more.

PencilPunx
August 25th, 2003, 01:44 AM
I'd buy it. I think that says enough.

Syklonis
August 25th, 2003, 07:18 AM
Yeah sex does usually sell. I want to try to do it only when necessary. I agree, half naked chicks shouldnt go into battle. But this one is a real hard ass, so at least she keeps her top on. I'm gonna try to mix aliens, mech, and religion all together that will probably piss alot of people of, but its a story I think most will like. That is if I ever get it done. I'll be posting more soon, once i finish uploading and revamping my website. Thanks for all the comments so far...

-syklonis

ChadTHX1138
August 25th, 2003, 01:38 PM
Sweet bajeebers's!!! I dig the painted cross over the boobies chick!

behemot5
August 25th, 2003, 03:24 PM
good pics.... i like the first more

sPeCiL
August 25th, 2003, 04:27 PM
wow!!! i love this so much!
i have a futuristic nazi fetish
i like that chick at the end, cool pose and stuff:evilbat:

Dementist
August 25th, 2003, 07:14 PM
Mein Liben Fur der Reich!!!!!

(Dammit, where's my Uemlat?)

I especially like the topless chick with the iron cross on her chest.

Szyslack
August 25th, 2003, 09:16 PM
hot nazi chicks rule!!! especially, freckled, blue skinned ones.

keep plugging away though.

Halis_Aetrous
August 26th, 2003, 12:47 AM
I love all of it except the second one. I think that particular design could be improved with some unusual clothing or -anything- really. It needs some more stuff to focus on.

reeves
August 26th, 2003, 05:11 PM
I love the First and last pictures.
Great style.
You got yourself a fan.
Now get starteded with that comic.

skvv
August 26th, 2003, 10:58 PM
Germans don't like being reminded of "that thing that happened half a century ago" but if you're going the nazi route, make sure you're not too "hellboy-ish", since that plotline's taken.

Great skillz!

Theo
August 27th, 2003, 01:36 PM
nazi mechs, nazi mechs nAZI MECHS!!!

Im such a sad bastard. :rolleyes: I just love seing worldwar II stuff revised into future scifi freaky stuff.

this stuff is cool, way cool :)

-theo

Carnifex
August 27th, 2003, 04:20 PM
you know you get an excellent effect on these pics when listening to "did my time" from korn.this kicks ass, even if i would be too..."respectfull" to make a comic about nazis i suppose.mostly because i connect nazis with pure evil, i think:rolleyes:
nevertheless your pics are extremely cool, but my favourite are the women( of course;) ) and that alien guy, of whom i really adore the facial expression. looking forward to your first comic panels:D

Sammy
August 27th, 2003, 05:04 PM
The last one is great!

I think the Nazi thing is exausted.. especially in the commic biz ... you could probobly find something just as interesting in history