In progress crappy monk.

[Pencil Soldier]

Started from an anatomy study. I know its really bad, i havent been drawing much latley. :(

http://www.angelfire.com/crazy2/pencilsoldier/monk.txt

bombs away!

[keyboard]

hey, don't call your work crappy, just find what you don't like about it and change it!:)

I'd say his head is off center(too far to the right), there is something wrong with the right forearm, its too large. Actually, both arms are different, either his left is too long, or his right is too short. I also think the abs could be smoothed out and made more symetrical. Finish this one- Its got a cool look to it.

[jrr]

yah know if you don't like it, don't post it.

[Pencil Soldier]

I still need to know what can do to improve. i was just rying to save the crits like "Thats really bad, try again."

[sone_one]

i think is right upper arm is too short and the left doesnt really match the whole figure... placement and shape

his abs is way too defined too.

but i think his head is ok (in form and placement)

[Pencil Soldier]

Ok ill flab up the abs, liek i said it was based of an antomy study so thats why they where so chunky. :p

Thanks alot so far guys! This is seriously the most and best crits i ahve ever gotten on this site. :D

[Skank]

one thing to consider is that male pecks arent round, makes his chest look a little too female.
try to flatten out the bottoms, make them a little more angular.

i think everything else has been commented on.

keep it up!