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[zeroe]

a couple of things:
firstly the pose
it looks very unnatural, i think shed have to go through great stress to achieve a pose like that, its bending around too much me thinks. With special attention to the legs here ^^

secondly i think the coloring is kinda flat, i think ur having trouble choosing betwween cell shading and tradtitional shading, maybe you should go for cell style on this one.

apart from that good job

[Halis_Aetrous]

It kindof looks like her spine is twisting unnaturaly from the position of her hips. See how her torso area is bent back but the hips are bent forward? Yeah... =D

I like the costume and the sword design. This could be an absolutely stunning piece if you added a background and a light source of an alternate color (instead of plain white light). Like a pale blue, maybe.

These are just my random musings, of course. Take em or leave them. Great work, though. I'm impressed.

[Porkasaurus]

Everything seems very ornate with the exception of her hair/face region. Maybe some eyeshadow or makeup ? Her hair appears to be pulled back as well. I like the flowing fabric strands that leave her body, maybe a thick strand of hair behind her.