7 more images from sketchbook

[bonedog]

from various sources, including ron lemen drawings.

mostly ballpoint pen. comments? any obvious things i should improve on?

-bone



http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/sketch_082203.jpg

http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/quick_082103_e.jpg

http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/quick_082103_d.jpg

http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/quick_082103_c.jpg

http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/quick_082103_4.jpg

http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/quick_082103_b.jpg

http://similarselection.org/aaron/blog/images/quick_082103.jpg

[Chromo48]

These are super! I really like the second one, I really like the way you pulled of the planes and shadows on the two sketches, very simply and quickly. The other would have to be that red marker sketch of that dude in the hat, very cool.

The only bit of advice I would give you right now, judging from that red sketch of the girl...You should probably work on you're anatomy a little more, but it looks like your doing that anyway. Great sketches!

BTW: Who is Ron Lemen? I know I've heard the name, but I just can't realize who it is.

[daniela]

I love your work! Your lines are awesome. The only criticism that I would have is that your anatomy on some of the sketches is a little off. As these are only sketches, and you probably would have fixed the problems before you went to the final stage, I don't really see that as much of a problem (unless you make your living on sketches!!). I look forward to seeing more from you. :)

[bonedog]

chromo: Thanks for the comments. I think I'm learning a lot about planes/shadows from studying Ron Lemen (Fredflickstone) and Kevin Chen on this forum.

daniela: agh! always the anatomy! I study a lot but never seem to be able to get it right :) Maybe I'm not studying the right way.

-Bone