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edmiglia
August 20th, 2003, 04:00 AM
http://procutlery.com/ed%20site/selfportraitptg2.jpg There's some good stuff in here. Mine appears larger than the painting. which is never a good thing. small pieces always look bad to be when they're seen larger than actual size.

ljefe
August 20th, 2003, 10:49 PM
pretty awesome for traditional...which it is right? and what is that, oils? you might try cleaning up some of the stuff that is a little undefined..like the shirt maybe, or around the ear? just an idea. and next time, i think a little color contrast in the lower left would really add to it.
great work

thomasaurus
August 20th, 2003, 10:52 PM
I like the subtle highlights on the face, and i agree with ljefe, some more definition around the lower area would help