my first post (i need help)

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hello there,
I've been watching all works over there for a while and.... wow it's amazing, these are so much talentuous guys over that forum, that i'm ashame to post.....
but i need help, I'm making a faerie cg and i've lost myself in too much details......
my english is too bad,(i'm french) but i understand fair enough....


C&C are most than welcome...


first sketch
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/tepech/tranquille.jpg
second one with background
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/tepech/tranquille2.jpg
and a detail on the girl
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/tepech/girl2dnplan.jpg


thx

[Porkasaurus]

I like the form and the composition. You should make the faeries wings translucent with sunlight. Maybe have some sun casting from behind her towards the "bonhomme" ;)

Nice work.

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u're right, i think i will make the sun casting from the girl toward the guy.... I 've sketch it win the light on the left, but it doesn't works....
about translucent wings, wow it's gonna be hard , i'll first try to make her in shadow, and the man softly lighted..

[Johannes]

Looks very good so far. Ur good at feet, arn´t U. :D