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Grendel
August 18th, 2003, 10:45 PM
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thomasaurus
August 18th, 2003, 11:57 PM
very action-like. sweet!
Grendel
August 19th, 2003, 08:10 AM
thanks alot jnorish
Killer Napkins
August 19th, 2003, 08:40 AM
thats friggin kkickasss man.. i always love ur pencils.. :D
endregan
August 19th, 2003, 08:59 AM
nice you know how to push your values!!! great drawing
LC3
August 19th, 2003, 04:07 PM
Very expressive! I think the compostion could be more unified... too many equal points of interest (the faces, eyes). More strategic value placement would help as well!
Grendel
August 19th, 2003, 11:56 PM
I Agree the lights are pulled out with a thought oflight coming down from the upper right but I am thinking that doesnt come off too well
Hardcore
August 20th, 2003, 09:52 AM
excellent I love the stuff in the background !!
bwkeough
August 20th, 2003, 12:52 PM
Great values, energy and attitude in your pencils (as always). I know the colored version will look great.

one crit: is the composition too evenly balanced? Your demon-killer guy with the guns is right in the middle and his arms and legs balance each other. Then you've got the big eyes matched, the top two demon-heads matched, and the third demon paired with the 2nd demons claw.

I'm not recommending you change this drawing, it has too much good stuff going on, but something to consider in the future. Perhaps contrasting an active central figure with a balanced back ground to suggest the hero creating postive change or vice versa, the hero standing firm against chaos?