My first enviroment concept...

[capone]

This is my first proper attempt at enviroments, its supposed to be a sort of futuristic wedding which takes place up high on a huge tree.

I have no idea but if I have made a "classic amateur" mistake please explain!, I am aware the circle shape is wrong, I cannt find any kind of help on drawing circles from that kind of perspective.

Lastly I am a bit dubious about my many characters, I don't think I have ever seen this kind of work feature people in it. Is it against enviromental concept law?, I would agree it maybe distracts from the main concept but I felt it was important to get the potential wedding scenario across. Is this wrong?

This is very important to me and so deeply appreaciate any feedback!!

http://www.caponeart.com/DELETEwedding.jpg

[Hunger_Artist]

Ok.. in my opinion nothing is ever "wrong" about an artwork.. there is only the unexpected :)



it looks like you have a nice layout.. now I think you should start thinking about what you can do within the parameters...

i.e. storyboard out a few different viewpoints within the picture. I did a quick one here:

http://anime.darkpact.com/o/pics/1061266400.png


a side view of the altar stand.. you could turn it into a great picture...think of other ways to view the scene that make sense visually!