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Sinix
August 18th, 2003, 03:55 PM
Here's some art I did this morning... it's of the main female character in my comic (unmade comic). Sorry the picture is big... it's actually 50% of the good looking size. Anyway.. she's a machine, etc. etc. etc.
http://images.deviantart.com/i/1/4/d/Destroyer_and_Creator.jpg
freakybob
August 18th, 2003, 04:32 PM
Nice layout and coloring.
Her upper body is a little too short compared to her legs (unless that's a stylistic or pose thing, in which case, you might want to consider drawing her from a view that clearly shows that) and women usually have longer necks. She should have that ulti-femme fatale look if you make the neck a lil' longer.
gorilla777
August 18th, 2003, 08:53 PM
Good design and color scheme but the legs are way too long even for an exagerated character. I think that fixing this would help immensely.
Aiwa
August 18th, 2003, 09:20 PM
I kinda agree, although I think if you made her torso longer you might get away with it. :D Otherwise I really like. Especially her boots~ Love the design on them.
Sinix
August 18th, 2003, 10:21 PM
Thanks for the comments, I was somewhat unsure of the legs. Since it was such a low, ground angle shot.. I wanted to really lengthened, then compacted looking as you went farther up, altho, I probably did go quite a bit overboard with that.
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