face i drew in painter

[BlackRose]

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid66/p118bf9c6b46fd0c498bef96682a476e5/fbdec82f.jpg

any crits or comments?

[AlkalineApplesauce]

hmm... The neck looks too wide, and the nose is so long that it sort of pushes the mouth too low on the face. I like the wrinkles in the forehead, very lifelike. Did you use a reference?

[BlackRose]

no i didn't use a ref. i usualy do have troube with having the mouth to low and the nose to long... i wasn't to picky about the neck when i drew this so its not the best. thanks for the crits:D

[feels]

The shadings a bit patchy, so a little more graduation would help. If you put more interior work on the cheeks and side of the forehead, people willl be able to understand where the planes of the head are.