First post - Gone fishing

[cresendoll]

hi everyone!
I'm new and I must say I admire all the awsome art posted here and hope I can join you some day.

The following are two bestfriends who will be quite important for eachother in their future. A girl and her dragonpet...
C & c are very welcome! Please tell me what you think and suggestions on how I can improve myself. Thanks!


http://home.chello.no/~cresendo/gonefishing.jpg

[Atmospheria]

welcome...
nice painting...but it has some problems...
girls left leg is thinner than the other...and the horizon must be straight. Other than these, the clouds are nicely done but if they are orange, the back off the girl should be in that color scale...so the sea.
Nice start..post more

[cresendoll]

Thanks for the reply Atmospheria!
I like the crits and I'm gonna adjust the pic when I get the time to do it. Thicken up the left leg a bit and .. well not sure about the orange reflections but I'll try to look into it.

... Does the dragon need to be dipped some more into the water?