Stealth Suit/BattleSuit Update 1

[3bleadpencil]

Hey All....I haven't drawn anything in a while....but this was
the only thing I've worked on in the past month...
...busy with work:(......crits welcome as always

http://home.cc.umanitoba.ca/~umbalas0/Leahcopy.jpg
http://home.cc.umanitoba.ca/~umbalas0/ss1.jpg


to be coloured soon I hope:)
Regards to the forum

[Sketch]

Hey 3bleadpencil, welcome back. Nice to see your stuff again. That's a sweet start. Maybe simplify it a bit? It'll look clearer cleaned up anyways, though. What about bringing the back of his shoulder armour forward to make his helmet?

[3bleadpencil]

...how do you mean bringing the back of his shoulder to the front to make his helmet?.....
C.:)

[Manta_Ray]

I dunno but the arm towards the back maybe has a foreshortening/perspective problem or vice versa? I like the style of the suit, just needs a little simplifying like Sketch said.

Cheers

:beer:

Manta

[Sketch]

Have the armour come up from his shoulders and then travel above his head and down... you could come up with some interesting shapes by doing this.

[Grooveholmes]

Looks nice, good concept.

Work on the hands please! The rest of it is soo strong. That's the only lacking part.

[mc_delroy]

well... i like it

good job

[killing.people]

i definately love your way of detail in this picture. it reminds me of a body rollerblade. the subject's *processing* right arm is too big and too long.

the subject's left arm is too conjested and gets lost in the body. it looks better where it isnt connected to the body because it has a balance of negative space. *edit, heh - i dont mean to keep the arm floating at his side .. try rotating the arm counter clockwise under 45 degrees and sticking it back on the body. try to leave negative space inbetween the arm and his body. :) laaate!
best explained with Kchen's critique:
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=447

http://www.imagewiz.net/images/kchen/imagewiz59103.jpg

-killing.people

[Grooveholmes]

Ooop! Killing, Bringing up my dirty laundry. heh heh.

[killing.people]

i was thinking about having it as my avatar or posting it in my signature .. you wouldnt mind would you?
:funny:

[Grooveholmes]

Oh, no.. of course not. Whatever's clever m'man

[3bleadpencil]

thanks for the crit's guys...slowly started on some adjustments and colour ....we'll see where it goes:)
Carlo