"Priest" comic work

[DoubleEdgeArtist]

'ello all!

Following are three pieces from a project I did for a class a year ago October. I found them and scanned them with the intention of painting over them. I haven't gotten that far yet, but I thought I'd put the lineart up here.

Take care and cheers!

PAGE 1
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1999/priestpage1kf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PAGE 2
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4387/priestpage2dfinalsmallhg0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[marak24]

There are perspective issues with the column there. It doesn't look very round because the parts that bulge out aren't elliptical. Also, the left side is lower than the right side and I'm assuming you're looking at it straight on, so they should be level with each other.

[DoubleEdgeArtist]

Right you are! At the time I think I justified it as part of the whole crumbling look I have going. Since then, I've learned to "murder my darlings" and do it right, even if it means doing it over. Thanks for the crit though.

Cheers!