Wolvie, that Bastard!

[johnsaulrubio]

Did this cartoony Wolverine last night, in Painter. Comments?

http://www.johnrubio.com/sketches/wolvie.jpg

Rubio
www.johnrubio.com (http://www.johnrubio.com/)

[Phantasmagoria]

Hmm, the pose seems wrong, When you draw, allways flip the picture so you see where the problem is, or if you made a mistake somewhere.

It also seems that the head is too far down, like if it came from the breasts. Also the arms are too off too, you should have placed the stomach a bit more to the right. It seems like there is no shoulder whatsoever, or atleast it doesn't belong there... lots too improve ;).

[Pigeon]

stylish. very dynamic. something does seem to be wrong from his belt on down. I can't tell whats going on there.

[Chromo48]

I like the pose, the only problem seems to be the gap between his legs at the crotch. Its a little large and I think that's what is throwing people off.

The linework is great and I could see that background becoming something really nice. I would work on rendering with color though. It looks like you painted fast so, I'm sure you're capable of better. Nice work!

[Szyslack]

i like the pose. the head does seem a little too low, or maybe its that he doesn't seem to have a neck. finnaly, the legs get a little lost, because the colors are similar to the background colors. other than that its pretty sweet.

[johnsaulrubio]

I'll work on the pose a bit. I see what you guys are saying...

Thanks a bunch for your input!!!

Rubio