Ordinary life (experimental strip)

[[schiva]]

It's the first strip I've made. I think I will do it weekly, but "we shall see what we shall see"

http://schakty.com/wp-content/gallery/strips/01finsm.jpg (http://schakty.com/wp-content/gallery/strips/01fin.jpg)
http://schakty.com/wp-content/gallery/strips/02finsm.jpg (http://schakty.com/wp-content/gallery/strips/02fin.jpg)

[Fishfish]

Heh, interesting!
A couple spelling mistakes, but the comic flows from frame to frame nicely.

[[schiva]]

Heh, interesting!
A couple spelling mistakes, but the comic flows from frame to frame nicely.
Can you show me where is mistakes? Thank you!

[Penabled]

Technically they're not spelling mistakes...but grammatical differences, just obvious clues that english is not your native language...no big deal really (unless of course they have been fixed already). And so far I like the flow...as well as the subject matter :)