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prawda
August 13th, 2003, 07:38 AM
hi all ...
im new here ... (15 years old, male, living in switzerland , thats all for the basic infoirmation) ...
at the moment i m trying to learn the basic human anatomy. i ll post sometimes the stuff i draw as exercises ... some comments and/or crits would be really helpful ...
7th august:
ok here we are ... i started at 7th august 03...(just some days ago..) and i began with legs ... these are just copies out of a book ( do you know Bammes ?)
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august7_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august7_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august7_3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august7_4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august7_5.jpg
8th august:
ok next day ... more legs and a male body (again copies)
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august8_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august8_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august8_3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august8_4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august8_5.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august8_6.jpg
9th august:
more crappybodies (copied)) and a live drawing of my legs (with a mirror)
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august9_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august9_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august9_3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august9_4.jpg
10th august
two lifedrawings ... legs and body... and my link hand
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august10_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august10_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august10_5.jpg
prawda
August 13th, 2003, 07:38 AM
11th august:
arm and hand studies ... (number 1,2,3 r copies) then my left hand again..
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august11_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august11_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august11_3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august11_4.jpg
12 th august ...
only two pages today , i was lazy .... my left hand in action ...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august12_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august12_2.jpg
ok thats all ...
(i couldnt post all the images at once..)
metaphysiks
August 13th, 2003, 08:50 AM
hey at least you are studying the right things. the best advice i can say it break from the book and draw from life, but remember what the book taught you.
good luck and ill check in
meta
japasset
August 13th, 2003, 11:01 AM
Great studies, looks nice, nice sketch technique with lines. As said before, you've soaked up the book, now apply it to life. It's tricky, it'll take more practice, you'll feel like you're making no progress for awhile drawing from life with what you drew from the book. But it'll sneak up on you and you'll be amazed on how much you've progressed over a period of time. It'll surprise you when you realize it. It's one of the joys of drawing.
Keep drawing til your hand hurts.
--Jeff
Syracuse, NY
thomasaurus
August 13th, 2003, 12:46 PM
very good studies, now as suggested, draw from life!
prawda
August 14th, 2003, 02:41 AM
thx for the comments .
yesterday i draw only lifedrawings of me (with a mirror) as u said ...
here it is
13th august
my link hand
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august13_1.jpg
a leg study
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august13_2.jpg
a arm study
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august13_3.jpg
prawda
August 15th, 2003, 07:04 AM
ok next udate ...
14th august ,all r lifedrawings with a mirror...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august14_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august14_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august14_3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/august14_4.jpg
crits are very welcome ...
Hunger_Artist
August 15th, 2003, 07:27 AM
ok.. first off you have sandman in your profile, which automatically makes you cool... as for your sketches cubistic studies are always good but dont be afraid to add in some curves here and there...also mabey try some gesture drawing and animals
steak-tron
August 16th, 2003, 09:02 PM
these are excellent studies. if your only 15 you will go places with yer skills. Try drawing some figures without references, you will find what areas you have problems with and then you can address them, jump back and forth. keep doing this untill it hurts and you'll get lots o' understanding o' the figure. you should also look at the skeleton - then add muscles.
keep up the good werk
DEVARSHY
August 22nd, 2003, 07:40 AM
your crosshatching style reminds me of Paolo Serpieri.
one who made Druuna.
prawda
September 14th, 2003, 02:05 PM
thx for comments ... heres a little update from the work i did today and yesterday ...
13 september : studies
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/september13_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/september13_2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/september13_3.jpg
14 september : lifedrawings (me at mirror and my brother)
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/september14_1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/september14_2.jpg
golgari
September 14th, 2003, 02:56 PM
wheew, considering you're only 15 you've got quite far indeed.
you're still a little bit bound to the bammes-style, but i have to admit that it looks awesome :)
the last two go away from that style a bit, yet they seem a bit unsure. maybe try doing more like that.
oh, and by the way... die "linke hand" is the "left hand", not the "link hand" ;)
prawda
September 15th, 2003, 07:29 AM
yes bammes is awesome ... i think there is a difference between the last two and the rest because i used much softer pencils for them and so i dont have to crosshatch the shadows ...
link hand :rolleyes: stupid mistake thx ...
prawda
November 2nd, 2003, 02:08 PM
hi
i havent posted for a long time but yesterday i ve bought my graphire 3 (A6) so i show u my first two sketches ... plz give me some crits...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/sandwar.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/greek.jpg
i will post a part of all the pencil stuff i have done later ...
prawda
December 14th, 2003, 12:00 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/me1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/me2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/game1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/lord1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/pill1.jpg
prawda
December 15th, 2003, 12:40 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle5.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle6.jpg
-The Swift-
December 15th, 2003, 03:13 PM
this stuff is great. well done. keep up the studies every sketch just gets better, congrats
prawda
December 18th, 2003, 12:23 PM
thx 4 reply swift
some new
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle7.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle8.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle9.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle10.jpg
endregan
December 18th, 2003, 05:20 PM
hey youre doing awesome. great studies too!
your dedication and hard work shows, and for only 15 years old that reminds me how much harder i should be working!
prawda
December 19th, 2003, 03:21 PM
thx endregan ...
some lord of the rings : return of the king sketches :
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle11.jpg
prawda
December 21st, 2003, 12:54 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/doodle12.jpg
prawda
December 27th, 2003, 03:54 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mered.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/meblue.jpg
two acrylic self portraits ... about 40 minutes each ...
plz give me some replys ...
prawda
January 4th, 2004, 03:00 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mono1.jpg
prawda
January 10th, 2004, 05:45 AM
me without ref ... i drew that in the train ....
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/me3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/lung1.jpg
prawda
February 9th, 2004, 04:13 AM
i started a new sketchbook ...
arghhh my scanner isnt big enough ... :bash:
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb5.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb6.jpg
prawda
February 10th, 2004, 11:37 AM
quick sketch with fineliner and eddings:
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb7.jpg
N D Hill
February 10th, 2004, 12:57 PM
It looks to me that you're getting into some very good habits. You're focusing on what's real and you'll ultimately find that to be essential. Not only that but you're doing it every day. You're progress is showing too so you should be very encouraged! I've been taking life drawing classes for about a year now and I agree with a lot of the comments here. Observing what's infront of you is paramount. the only way to observe relationships between muscles, colors, light and dark is by studying them first hand and recreating them. Also, being able to walk around your subject in order to put it into context with it's composure and surroundings is an advantage that you won't get from books.
A trick that my professors showed me that you might find usefull, is to study with a renaissance aid. This is basically nothing more than a transparent projector sheet with a grid printed on it. When you buy them, they're loose so you might want try making a rigid frame out of card board so you can hold it by one corner or clip it to something stable in front of your subject. It might seem like a very boring and mathmatical approach at first, but in time you'll find yourself drawing living subjects much more naturally as your proportions correct themselves automatically.
Since you're only 15, I'd bet your getting an earlier start at life-drawing than most of us here. Certainly earlier than me. Keep up the great work and welcome aboard!
-Noel
prawda
February 13th, 2004, 02:47 AM
thx for this very helpful reply , exo i will keep that in my mind...
by the way i m 16 now
here are some new pages...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb8.jpg
scanner is too small so i dont show the lower page ... it isnt very interesting ...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb9.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nb1a.jpg
bahamut
June 14th, 2004, 01:31 PM
hey m!
sooo lang häsch jetzt au wider nöd nüt postet! sind geil gworde am schluss! wott au en scanner dihei! da isch jedefalls de link zu minere siite
n
van
June 14th, 2004, 02:12 PM
Looking good so far...keep em coming!
prawda
June 15th, 2004, 03:18 AM
hey i ve got replys... thx for the motivating words... i should post something within the next weeks but as first i ve to draw something new i ve just worthless scribbledump here ...
at bahamut : nice to meet u here
cu :chug:
edit:: yeah my sketchbook has two pages now that motivates ..... :electric:
prawda
June 17th, 2004, 12:29 PM
a little update: a page of my dumpbook
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/skp1.jpg
and a digitalsketch...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/face1.jpg
i know that suxx :barf:
cu
van
June 17th, 2004, 12:58 PM
That first page is cool. I really like your pen work. Cool style!
prawda
June 21st, 2004, 01:23 PM
thx van , heres a little study with a fineliner...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/study1.jpg
:o
character
June 21st, 2004, 02:22 PM
you've got some good stuff man. keep on postin. i love that last arm study. i <3 ink drawings. peace peace
bahamut
June 24th, 2004, 11:21 AM
I too like your ink a lot... if i had to pick a favourite thing about your drawings, it would be that!
what shall i say? like the arms, but know the original all too well;) , and the faces are nice, too, but too few!. lets see more!
prawda
June 25th, 2004, 11:50 AM
god told me to update my dusty sketchbook so i did it ... (no it was bahamut)
@character : ink rules
@ bahamut : i try to draw more but im very lazy and sometimes very busy :realmad: :electric:
here r two scribbles ....
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nu3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nu6.jpg
i know boring
cu :o
:chug:
BRANDISH
June 25th, 2004, 12:47 PM
great improvement! i like those last drawings.
(and bammes is great too.)
bahamut
June 27th, 2004, 02:02 PM
wow!
REALLY love the smart guys on the last one...my fav drawing of yours so far -period-. Is that you and your brovva??
update coming tomorow for me too!
n.
PS:I hated this new colour...but like the new vBulletin and beginning to love the bright-modern colours already!!
prawda
June 27th, 2004, 02:41 PM
thx brandish
@bahamut :no it isnt me. but nice that u like it :cool: i hate the new colours too the old brown was MUCH better . after all it has got new weird :mohawk: :baby :afro1:
ok heres a little update i used ink and a brush
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nu1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nu2.jpg
cu :rock:
mentler
June 28th, 2004, 08:16 AM
Looks like you have spent some time with Bammes books.
I teach anatomy at The Society of Figurative arts.
Check out the site for the school - I am starting to post demonstration
drawings from classes. I think it will interest you!
The past several weeks I have been drawing the figure from memory from at least 3 views i.e. front, back and side (the three graces) I think this is a great exercise and highly recommend it to my students.
Am also working on basic skull construction---look for posting on tsofa site in next few days
http://tsofa.com/?faculty.gallery.tre
prawda
June 28th, 2004, 10:36 AM
wow thats really imperssive ... thx for the great link
heres a conceptdrawing for a weird submarine or something like that :crazy:
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nu4.jpg
cu
prawda
June 29th, 2004, 06:51 AM
oh god my thread is on page two :bigeyes: :ep: (i love the smiles)
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nu5.jpg
that suxx i have to draw more :bash:
prawda
June 29th, 2004, 10:00 AM
@mentler : thx again i love ur page and all the figure drawings ... here is a torso study i did ... i used mentlers stuff as reference
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/torso.jpg
cu
van
June 29th, 2004, 10:10 AM
Great studies!! Keep em coming! :)
prawda
July 1st, 2004, 07:51 AM
thx van.
any other opinions about that stuff ? :mrt:
cu praw :coffee:
Hyver
July 1st, 2004, 07:56 AM
those concept drawings are a great way to improve on perspective while doing interesting stuff at the same time (well i bet you have more fun inventing spaceships than drawinh old chapels in the countryside, yea? :) )
you could give them more depth by shading some parts with markers, or digital.
mind the tailfins on the naboofighter-like ship.
keep up the stuff :eat:
prawda
July 8th, 2004, 08:00 AM
heres a little update ...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/uu1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/uu2.jpg
cu praw :chug:
prawda
July 10th, 2004, 06:48 AM
i tried pencil again (i didnt use it for a long time) and i liked it.the only problem is that dont know how to scan it the right way it always looks so much worse on the screen... anyway here it is...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/pencil.jpg
cu praw :chug:
waronmars
July 10th, 2004, 07:24 AM
Holy shit man, your improvement is phenomenal! Good to see a fellow whippersnapper rippin' it up (not literally), your faces have especially gotten better since you first posted one. Keep going, I will be watching from the wings, like a hawk I tell you, a HAWK!! :bigeyes:
prawda
July 12th, 2004, 01:56 PM
wow waronmars thanks for this very motivating reply :jump2: ... i must draw more ... damn goooo o :scared: :alien3:
cu :chug: praw
elboy
July 12th, 2004, 02:11 PM
hey, there's some great improvement from your first posts to these recent ones. I like your inkwork. The way you're applying value w/ pencil in this last post looks like they way one would work in ink, but I can't really offer much help cause I find myself doing the same thing (working the same in pencil and pen). Anyway, just keep drawing and you'll just keep getting better. nice stuff.
Jworion
July 12th, 2004, 02:13 PM
these are really really great and its so great that you are doing studies because i can see a definite improvement ... keep it up!! :jump2:
prawda
July 12th, 2004, 04:16 PM
thx @ elboy and jworion :waves:
next page:
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/pencil2.jpg
praw :beer:
Groover McNab
July 12th, 2004, 04:19 PM
You show a lot of confidence with your inked stuff. Keep it up!
prawda
July 13th, 2004, 04:20 PM
good news everrryone ( i just watched futurama :btu: )
i visited the zoological museum today and i did some sketching. here are the first pages i just scanned in :
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus2.jpg
praw :chug:
prawda
July 14th, 2004, 02:15 AM
i scanned in the rest
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus5.jpg
praw
prawda
July 14th, 2004, 02:16 PM
nothing to crit about this stuff ?? what a pitty ...
prawda
July 14th, 2004, 03:41 PM
i just scanned in some of the pics from todays museum session ...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus6.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus9.jpg
PelleTM
July 14th, 2004, 04:04 PM
Who did you sell your soul to be able to draw like that? ;)
Nice ones! Keep them coming
prawda
July 15th, 2004, 03:53 AM
thx pelle, heres the rest of the last museum session :
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus7.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus8.jpg
praw :chug:
EDIT :: WOHOOOOO PAGE 33333333333333333333333333333 ( i mean 3 )
metaphysiks
July 15th, 2004, 04:19 AM
pretty nice man. i always enjoy animal drawings from life. do we get to see more?
meta
PeggyChung
July 15th, 2004, 05:26 AM
Hey Prawda, nice stuff ya got here, very patient rendering. only comment i have is darken your values, i notice i dont see much of the darker scale of shading, only the iris of the eyes. keep it up
btw how long have you been drawing seriously and how much a day?
prawda
July 15th, 2004, 07:49 AM
@ metaphysiks : thx man i feel honoured. i dont know when i m going to visit the museum next time i havent a lot of spare time at the moment...
@ ladylioness : thx, the thing about the value is a very helpful crit. i will try to remember this... i did my first human anatomy study about an year ago (beginning of the sketchbook). i always have periods when im drawing a lot and then i m drawing nothing for months. how much do i draw a day ? the two museum sessions took my about 7 hours but i didnt draw all the time. i spend a lot of time just lurking around ...
cu
prawda
July 16th, 2004, 11:22 AM
here is the short museum session #3, i tried to keep the crit of ladylioness in my mind...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus10.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/mus11.jpg
:chug:
prawda
July 17th, 2004, 03:52 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/torso1.jpg
prawda
July 18th, 2004, 09:36 AM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/arm1.jpg
no crits?
prawda
July 19th, 2004, 02:30 AM
night session :crosseyed
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/noodle1.jpg
i start to feel a bit alone in here...
prawda
July 20th, 2004, 03:48 AM
i started a new book ( perhaps i post a pic later) anyway heres the first page
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/book1.jpg
prawda
July 26th, 2004, 03:11 AM
update
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/newbook1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/newbook2.jpg
:chug:
waronmars
July 26th, 2004, 03:39 AM
Yeee-haw! Glad to see you've kept it up, those animal sketches are awesome! That last post is the best of you're people drawings, great to see continued improvement there. Vampire cows...w00t! :firedevil
prawda
July 26th, 2004, 10:18 AM
thx waronmars , i was getting a bit depressed cos i was so alone ... its also nice that u can see improvement cos its in my eyes the most imporntent thing , thx again
edit: where is the chug-smile ?????????? conceptart i hate youuuuuu :upset:
prawda
September 16th, 2004, 01:18 PM
hi,
well i didnt post for a while... anyway here is an update , some pages from my sketchbook. i would enjoy some crits and stuff like this thanks a lot ...
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn1.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn2.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn3.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn4.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn5.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn6.jpg
cya. prawn.
jester
September 16th, 2004, 04:18 PM
You've got a good grasp of shapes and light directions. In your portraits / faces the mouths are usually too small and the noses too long (which is due to using the standard scheme, I think). Also it seems that you get bored by rendering the hair. Take a look at how strands of hair form groups and how each have a light and shadow resp. dark areas.
Hope this helps.
Jester
MrFrost
September 16th, 2004, 04:54 PM
for 15 years of age, you blow my mind away. very inspiring to see your work...
prawda
September 17th, 2004, 12:20 PM
@jester: yeah thats true, long noses are something which u can find in all my sketches ... :S
@mr. frost: thx a lot , by the way im 16 now...
here are some other pics from my sketchbook, few weeks old
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn7.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn8.jpg
p.
prawda
September 17th, 2004, 12:26 PM
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn9.jpg
http://mitglied.lycos.de/schmatthay/images/nnn10.jpg
p.
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