Slap Me

[blackrobin]

here is a piece i just finished for the chow
again, as far as my eyes can see, its a finished piece, i cant figure what to add/change or anything thats wrong with it
if an experienced artist take a quick look at it, he/she will instantly know how i do this piece

so now hopefully you good people can give some crits on it, on anything
work flow, brush, layer techniques
color, value, light, rendering, anatomy
design, style, composition, concept

anything that you found out to be lacking, or things that you think might improve the piece
give me a slap on the face, i want harsh constructive criticism

http://community.conceptart.org/gallery/I/2005/01/01/29756.jpg

[ATAnderson]

If it was me, I would tighten it up a bit, and probably add some stronger more definate shadows.

But that just me.

Cool concept anyways man.

ATA

[walnut]

I'd rethink the guns on her arms copmpletely if i were you. Or at least draw some decent arms and then figuring how to attach those guns. Also she's got a distractingly long nose, i'm not sure what's happening to her right leg and there's something off about the armour on the abdomen. Looks off center or something.

[blackrobin]

walnut - its so obvious now that you pointed it out, im almost embarrassed to show it now, you are right about the arm too, i designed the weapon first and the tried to attach the arm to it, i should have gone more carefully with the anatomy

ATAnderson - yep it would make it nicer, will make an update to it, as a concept, at first i like it, then i totally hate it when it just dont work in the chow, nice sketchbook btw