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[Sean McClain]

these are some concept designs for a first person shooter game which s totaly awsome!

[bestow]

wow, i have no idea what i'm looking at.

maybe do rough sketches first. try looking at it from someone elses point of view, who doesnt already know what it is

[emily g]

I moved your thread to the Sketches & WIP section--the Finally Finished section is for professional and highly finished work and I think your work still looks very sketchy at this stage.

[Dose206]

good call emily g. and I second bestow, for most of these images I had no idea what the hell was going on.

[Nexus]

Yea. I got nothing. I'm gonna have to go with the other people. I don't see the things you are describing at all. Just color blobs and scribbles.