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[SMILEFACE]

i dont know what im doing

[sciboy]

You've made that pretty clear with all those duplicate threads I've had to delete, if you look on the right there's an edit button.

And if you want a place to put all your stuff regularly and recieve feedback a sketchbook thread is better suited, this place is more for getting critique on a particular artwork.

[SMILEFACE]

thanks for your help

[Bones Weep Tedium]

At first I quite liked the high contrast between the highly saturated, very bright figures next to heavy black, but after a while I realised I couldnt see what was actually going on!

I like the blue colour scheme, and the few pieces of other colours help it from seeming like too monochrome. I think the next thing you should do is work into the background some more to help distinguish the forms in there (I can see splodges of blue, but I can't really see exactly what they're supposed to be) and maybe use some more midtones to help distinguish the form of the figures - I can't tell whose hand is doing what, and I'm not sure whether the figure on the left has any arms or not!

[Alexandr Pascenko]

pretty cool vision for not knowing what you´re doing . but if you know in what kind of direction you want to improve i might crit something.

[ChaoticKnight]

Hey, it looks like a cool pic so far. You definitely need to heighten the highlights and make the darks deeper, as well as use some harder brushes to reveal more details. I tried to do a little paintover, just make sure you show some more detail and add more depth.

[kev ferrara]

What's going on?

kev

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=101106

[SMILEFACE]

thanks for the feed back I really apriciate it ,I just had a picture of an old 70s velvet painting in a motel and tried to bring it to the future.