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Jacques
August 11th, 2003, 09:42 AM
It's completely made in pen. It's the first time I post here so I'm curious what you think!

http://www.traction-it.nl/img/femaleandroid.jpg

Gray
August 11th, 2003, 11:18 AM
First of all, welcome!

Now for the crits: :)

The pose, and especially the legs, bother me a bit. It doesn't match the rest of the figure.

Shouldn't we be able to some the arm behind the hand going into the torso?

Also the head seems a bit to large.

Rendering is quite good and i really like the thing on her hand and how it connects with it.

cheers

Pencil Soldier
August 11th, 2003, 12:21 PM
The head and hands are very large. Also, if i remember, a female is more comfortable stading with kness pointing in, not bowlegged like they are here.

Jacques
August 12th, 2003, 02:21 AM
Thanx for the advice! I'll work on it!!