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brianhamner
July 13th, 2007, 12:58 PM
Just wanted to see if anyone here could spot any compositional issues before I started painting this. I need a fresh pair of eyes.
wiggum
July 13th, 2007, 01:47 PM
The only thing I see that needs your attention would be the apparent lack of perspective on the arrow. It just doesn't look right. Other than that this looks like it could be an amazing peice.
GuyRandom
July 13th, 2007, 02:13 PM
The arrow looks fine to me, but the foreground could be bit darker to give the image some depth.
AmontilladoAg
July 14th, 2007, 11:37 AM
That skull in the foreground's a nice touch 8)..

Wendigo might be right about the arrow.. hm.. mebbe it's a little long? dunno..

Cool pic, btw :)
Rummity
July 14th, 2007, 02:16 PM
The dark parts seem to stick out and dont really blend with the middle and foreground, if it was more gradual i think it would create more depth. But its a very nice drawing.