The CEO needs a blood test (Critique please)

[Neondevil]

I wanted to get a critique before I start coloring.

[Leftyy]

MWAHAHAHA, :D I love this.

[chobomaster]

Lol, he looks pretty damn nasty, good job on that :)

Maybe you should move the glass to the left, over the stomach where it would be more distinct? Also, it's transparent inside itself but you can't see through it.

Another thought, to me his pecs look more like real boobs than man boobs--unless you were going for that, which would make him really creepy..

[Xazy]

The CEO looks great! I'm not as convinced by the other character. The ear in particular is bugging me; try looking for some references of that angle and see what you can come up with?

I also feel that the CEO's grip on his cigar is a little unnatural. Like maybe his wrist should be hanging out rather than curling in, "palm" up, kind of thing.

[Neondevil]

Thanks for the critiques. I kinda abandoned this one for awhile but I made some changes, how am I doin?

[Neondevil]

Finished

[Silvertone]

Yeah, lookin good but I think you can put some kind of expression in foreground guy. Actually I'm not picking up any emotion from either character. And the clouds on the right should be re done, the shape between the guys forehead pointing to the chair is really distracting.

[Silvertone]

There are some tangents going on (where edges touch other edges - or come too close) where the overlapping needs to be pushed more. These will tend to flatten out an image.

[Neondevil]

There are some tangents going on (where edges touch other edges - or come too close) where the overlapping needs to be pushed more. These will tend to flatten out an image.


I fiddled with it a bit. How am I doin?

[Silvertone]

Yep, that's a bit more on the right track.

And I have to add for your future drawings, use reference for chairs, desks, interiors, etc. This one just looks made up.

[Goozoogal]

A basiic concept I have is no kissing on the canvas. That means distinctive overlaps control space, as well as pointed objects touching other objects, expecially in the sides, distracts. An akward motion like the bosses left hand draws attention. His hand normally would be facing upward, but it's ok. The glass definitely has the focal point. Why a pink office? Your heavy clouds are coming forward. Is that where you want them? This has really progressed nicely. Hope you give it just a tiny tweak more.