Yoyo

[laterDays]

Hi, here is something ive been working on for a few days. Comment please, especially if you have ideas for the composition.

[The Dream Walker]

i like the feel of it. especially the ghosty colours.

its not clear he's wearing a hood though... or is he? I hope he is.
or else thats one mountain of a head.

[laterDays]

Thanks dreamwalker :). And, yes, that is a hood. I will work on it more to make it clearer.

[HeathMeister]

i personally think the darks need to be pushed more to show depth and some perspective...

again just bump the contrast up... and also work on the facial hair a little more.. either more color or just a tad darker to bring them out so the viewer can read them better...

overall nice so far and keep painting

[Leftyy]

I'm having some problems with the KKK-style extremely tall and pointy hood.

Also the hexagons at the bottom annoy me because it's just too much repetition.

[Nistarn]

dont lead the eye out of the picture, if i follow that fire from his mouth i have trouble to come back

[Leftyy]

dont lead the eye out of the picture, if i follow that fire from his mouth i have trouble to come back

That's what was bothering me!

Sorry, I just couldn't put my finger on it. Okay, yeah, I'm out of here.

[laterDays]

Hi, I read the comments. I dont have much time to say stuff, but here is my adjustments so far!