View Full Version : Punkish Pachyderm
July 4th, 2007, 10:33 PM
Long time no post for me...man people just keep raising the bar on this board! Bravo to all for keeping your noses to the grindstone.
July 5th, 2007, 01:09 AM
-Just a suggestion - you could do some really cool stuff with the trunk and create some nice dyanmic lines with it - something to think about.
-Also, is he supposed to be like an accordian in the middle? that would be something interesting to play with too
-Tone down the 2 bright lights at the bottom - too distracting. In fact - losing the whole bottom to darkness with some light here and there catching the details of the machinery through the smoke would be nice and add to the mood.
July 5th, 2007, 02:19 AM
Haha :) Very funny man, I love it. Agree with the above critiques, also maybe define some of the smoke more, just a suggestion.
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