Does it look unreelistic?

[PokyParagon]

I drew this the other day after a quick idea and a previous sketch, and I haven't really been drawing this sort of stuff and wondered if it doesn't look realistic? Help! :dead: http://community.conceptart.org/gallery/I/2005/01/01/28863.jpg

[ExilE]

Actually, no this doesn't look bad at all. You might want to post it a little bit smaller, and clean up your scan before posting next time though. Maybe think about using a softer pencil for your darker values, it looks like you are trying to one that's a bit too hard. Might be cool to see this guy refined a bit, you could throw some tracing or drafting paper on top of your sketch and clean him up some....or not. Cool stuff though, I would like to see some more.

[PokyParagon]

Ok, fixed it a little, couldn't get the scan quality fixed :( changed a few things I really didn't like, and here it is. http://community.conceptart.org/gallery/I/2005/01/01/28907.jpg

[PokyParagon]

the extra arms are an inspiration from Keith Thompson.