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Szyslack
August 6th, 2003, 08:06 PM
keep scrolling...
zeroe
August 7th, 2003, 09:02 AM
the main problem is that the platform the two are standing on apeears as if tis way to steep and they might slip off any moment, thus not conveying a real sense of distance. It should be leveled out more giving view to a proper city skyline.
Szyslack
August 27th, 2003, 06:15 PM
just a bit further...
daniela
August 27th, 2003, 08:49 PM
For some reason the roadway is throwing off the whole picture for me. I think it's supposed to be really high up, but it doesn't look like that at first glance. If you aren't attached to the roadway, I would crop the picture down and focus on the two falling characters.
Szyslack
August 27th, 2003, 09:58 PM
yeah, i think thats what i was thinking. Anyway, i'm still drawing this so hopefully it turns out well. I'm not too good with architexture.

so, thanks for the input.
bustabustu
August 28th, 2003, 01:28 AM
I think if you added more buildings above the road it would even things out a little.
georgem
August 28th, 2003, 01:47 AM
I think the second picture looks fine although the jet like car looks as if its tilting towards the point of view to much?
I just had an idea, wouldn’t it be cool if some one had stopped in a car and had got out and was looking at the two people falling? (Random idea of the top of my head, ignore if necessary)
Anyway good work!
Szyslack
August 28th, 2003, 07:15 PM
georgem, i actually thought about that too.
georgem
August 29th, 2003, 04:08 AM
Really? Cool
Are you going to do it?
Chiba
August 30th, 2003, 09:52 AM
Hey, I dunno if it's just my computer but I've tried this post a couple of times and all I see is red X's.
Hopefully (for everyone else's sake) I'm the only one missing out but I thought I'd let you know anyway,

Chiba
daniela
August 30th, 2003, 10:52 AM
You are not the only one Chiba. I see red x's now too.
Szyslack
August 30th, 2003, 04:47 PM
the second one is working now
don't know what the problem was
daniela
August 30th, 2003, 06:02 PM
:confused: Still not there Szyslack. I even tried CTRL + Reload a few times and I still coudn't see either one.
Szyslack
August 31st, 2003, 10:59 AM
DAMNIT!!!!! I don't know what is wrong with this thing.

ugh....:rolleyes:
Szyslack
August 31st, 2003, 10:34 PM
maybe this one will work. too bad the color job sucks though.
http://images.deviantart.com/i/6/a/7/gravity.jpg
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2882900/
daniela
August 31st, 2003, 10:45 PM
Still not there. Maybe you should contact someone in charge of where you are trying to link your pictures from.
Szyslack
August 31st, 2003, 11:08 PM
it works when i first link it, but after taht...

anyway, i put a link to it as well so hopefully you can take a look at it.


thanks for your intrest everyone.