Im stucked!!

[Sickboy]

Hi there!

I ry to make a group picture for my splitting rpg group.

the scatch is just my first idea. But I think the table is making the whole picture too stiff. Any ideas?

Thanks!!!

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa93/Sickboypaint/Vorabend.jpg

[MilesNoctis]

Well, much anatomy and perspective corrections needed,
maybe someone could make a quick workover????
I would do it myself but since my drawing abilities arent that good i think i would fail
but anyway nice idea!

[Sickboy]

Well thanks, but thats just a very bad scetch. Something i did in a few minutes.
Alls other sketches with more details are so confusing cause i focus on the gesture or other detail. This one will just give an impression how it should look at the end.

The problem is I try to find a composition which ist not so stiff...

[Sickboy]

Heres one better scetch for the Dwarf on the left. Got a lot of scetches for the different chars but the hole composition is not what I want And I can't find something better.

The idea is that these chars are discussing after a hard day where to travel the next day. The first idea I had was a dark room around a table but everyting I tried looked boring or stiff.

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/aa93/Sickboypaint/Rugosch2.jpg